Shadow in the Water Cover Art, Ultimate Edition

I sometimes have moments where I look back on a piece that I did and think, 'You know, I can do a LOT better than this'. Luckily, I have the means to do so: I've officially revamped the cover for 'Shadow in the Water'. True, I like the style of the old cover, but admittedly it's a lot more messy, and with this this one I got to inject a lot more emotion and meaning.
Here's the original for comparison.

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EDIT (8/30/2015):
Added some particles and more bubbles, this time.